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Sunset after a violent storm. Silhouette is myself, I was just experimenting. I like messing around with silhouettes.
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August 14, 2009
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PENTAX Corporation
PENTAX K10D 1/15 second F/3.5 18 mm 100 Jun 26, 2009, 8:35:47 PM Share
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Critiques
I think the wires in the background are pretty distracting, so you should have probably moved a little over, so there would be nothing in the sky. The bushes wouldn't be in the way than.
Also composition wise it would look better.
Maybe a lower perspective, but slightly turned upwards would also help by making the sky bigger and less of the just floor part.
But still nice work!
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